I've had gear sit in damp conditions and watched internal dust slowly degrade image quality over time, so I get why you're concerned. That said, internal dust alone doesn't mean it's toast - lots of lenses develop some over years of use. The real warning signs are autofocus that hunts or fails, visible fungus or heavy separation in the lens elements, optical aberrations that show up in photos (weird ghosting or loss of sharpness), or if the barrel physically feels loose.
Eight years of heavy use on a 24-70 is solid life, and getting it serviced by Canon is actually pretty reasonable before dropping cash on a new lens. The focusing sounds changing could just be the motor wearing, which they can often fix. I'd say check what a service quote runs first - if it's a couple hundred bucks you're probably good to go. If they tell you there's internal fungus or element damage, that's when you're looking at replacement instead.